We've created our opening sequence. However we didn't follow the storyboard/script to plan. Nevertheless I feel it was better that way, as we made more interesting creative choices and had new and more practical ideas when filming it...
- We took out the school scene as we felt they made the piece drag, and didn't add much to the sequence.
- We changed some of the dialogue at the dinner scene, from the original script, because we improvised when filming it. Then edited it all together.
- We moved the screaming into the pillow part to straight after the dinner scene.
- We removed scene with the Father standing in the doorway, because we felt it was too subtle and the viewer probably wouldn't understand what we were trying to imply.
- We created a different ending of her sitting on the sofa with the tv, but just thinking instead, then taking paracetamol to try and end her suffering.
- We finished with the mum coming into the room and finding her dead.
We are now going to use audience feedback to try and adapt our opening sequence, to improve it...
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